Wonderful work Katelyn! I can really see you're putting a lot of effort into your blog posts. I like how you have colour coded the stories so we know what one is the truth, very clever! Maybe next time you could have it so two different things come off eat an egg shell? That way you are developing your story even more.
Wonderful work Katelyn! I can really see you're putting a lot of effort into your blog posts. I like how you have colour coded the stories so we know what one is the truth, very clever! Maybe next time you could have it so two different things come off eat an egg shell? That way you are developing your story even more.
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking my work Miss Farr. Next time I will think about how I will develop my story more.
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