Today for literacy I lessened to a story called The stolen stars of Matariki, then I had to think about what else could be the solution for the problem. After that, I had to rewrite the part when the problem happened in my own words. The thing that was the most difficult for me was when I had to make my own ending. The thing that I enjoyed the most was when I was thinking of new solutions for the problem.
Ka pai Katelyn, great work. I like how you have thought about different ways the story could end before settling on your favourite one. I also like how you described how they made the stones sharper. Maybe next time you could use their names instead of saying the kids as this would make it sound more like a story from a story book.
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Miss Farr
Hi Miss Farr, Thanks for liking my post. I spent all day on this post. I didn't know the names of the kids.
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