Hi Katelyn I really like your DLO I think its very cool I love your background I like the way that you have explained what tynker is but maybe next time you could explain more about it like what you enjoyed. Instead of saying tynker is a place maybe next time you could say tynker is an app because by saying tynker is a place people might actually think you could go there
Hi Katelyn I really like your DLO I think its very cool I love your background I like the way that you have explained what tynker is but maybe next time you could explain more about it like what you enjoyed. Instead of saying tynker is a place maybe next time you could say tynker is an app because by saying tynker is a place people might actually think you could go there
ReplyDeleteHi Tylah I think you are right maybe I do need to write app instead of a place.
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